The economy has undergone so deep transformations that advertising has become an industry for itself. Confinated and limited to condensed messages printed on the last pages of the newspaper, advertising has ended up to be one of the most influencial and powerful industry in our economy. Althoug it is common say that advertising is something annoying and boring, I would underline the positive aspects related to this particular way of communication.
First of all, advertising in form of Internet pop-ups, billboards or flyers help us to make a choice, when it comes to buying a product or selecting a service. Some claim that we got used to watching advertisin, that it has no more effect on our decisions. Although watching or reading an ad is not automatically linked to a purchase, it cannot be said that we do not pay attention to advertising. We are surrounded by advertising everyday, while we are watching a movie on TV, listening to the radio, surfing the Internet or just walking down the street, Some argue that is a triky way to induce us unwilling to buy some products. The jury is still out on a final answer but there is no doubt that advertising is a powerful way to persuade people.
The silver lining of advertising is that it represents a major industry which offer many job positions and it looks for the most creative and talented people. Some advertisement are little, preciuos pieces of art and if they do not necesseraly make us buy an item, they are nevertheless always worth watching them.
To conclude, I would affirm that advertising has still a tremendous potential in our life, which in spite of the fact that it does not mechanically cause an impulsive decision to buy items, it plays still a major role in our day-to-day life.
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- Some people say that studying at school in not important because most important things are learnt outside the school Do you agree or disagree 89
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- Some people think that it is important to spend a lot of money on a wedding celebration while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ising. We are surrounded by advertising everyday, while we are watching a movie on TV, l...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...and talented people. Some advertisement are little, preciuos pieces of art and if t...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ays worth watching them. To conclude, I would affirm that advertising has stil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, while, no doubt, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82236842105 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98222312686 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3440475104 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223631528537 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828713613622 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304099855516 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119394736213 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582141315912 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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