Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertisement industry has grown drastically and has influence on many people towards buying things, while others argue that adverts has become very common that
rarely anyone pay attention to it. In this essay I will discuss both the views, however, in my opinion, advertisement have major influenced people to buy things.
On one hand, advertisement has become common medium to sale the products and services due to which many ads are displayed everywhere in the form of commercial advertisement. For instance, in order to promote any products or services, many ads would be shown while watching a movie or daily shop. Additionally, ads would be displayed on social networking sites. In 21st century, due to hectic schedules, hardly anyone gives importance to the advertisement.
On the flip side, with the unprecedented development in the field of science and technology, the way of advertisement have tremendously changed and improvised. Previously people used to visit the place personally where the products are being sold in order to understand the feathers of the different products and then after comparing
similar products they come to final decision. However, with the advertisement people tends to buy the same product of which they have seen the ad. Moreover, by making a public figure as a brand ambassador in the advertisement, this have great influence on the people and hence the sales of the product will increase. The best example for this would be the brand dove soap, showing comparison between an ordinary soap and dove, it creates an impression that dove is the best soap in the world. Additionally, assigning Disha Patani, a famous actress, people have a false notion and believe that actress uses the same soap.
In conclusion, although it might be a pain those who are not willing to buy the product, adverts being the best method of promoting products and services, it does influence people in buying the products. Advancement in the advertisement are done at a very good pace and will continue to develop in coming years.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13134328358 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91367444557 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3649061529 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18167598341 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691598890197 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663080050377 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103548086699 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694151452481 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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