In society nowadays, it is easy to see many platforms of marketing such as billboards or banners. Some people say that promoting is extremely successful at persuading people to buy things. Meanwhile, others think that because of the inconvenience of advertisements, we are likely to ignore them. In my point of view, I believe that both statements are correct but I lean toward promoting products.
On the one hand, there are several reasons with regard to the success of advertising. First and foremost, investing in marketing give rise to the popularity of that brand name, and they will be stuck in people’s minds. Individuals tend to buy something they feel familiar with; hence the income of that companies will be enhanced. Thanks to the innovation of technology, we also face a huge number of online advertisements that we can not skip. In this way, owners could present a short introducing video, this information would provide customers the ability and perks of their products.
On the other hand, advertising also has some downsides. First of all, people today gravitate towards researching knowledge about what they want on the Internet instead of listening to the advertisement. Therefore, these marketing ways are not only ineffective but also make individuals feel uncomfortable about their brands and could contribute to skipping this whenever they see them. On top of that, buying things from advertisements without any deep information about them can be ascribed to a waste of money and unexpected consequences.
Bottom line, as a human, I personally think that marketing is the best way for brands to attain a large number of customers; however, before embarking on spending money on something, we need to do research about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ng is the best way for brands to attain a large number of customers; however, before embarking on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, so, therefore, while, such as, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02284784687 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3212229528 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22851801364 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794887831313 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941153905874 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129147772798 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806569626206 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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