Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Education is the process of facilitating learning, skills, values and believes. While some are believing that it is not enough to depend on educational facts with a lake of practical skills. I totally agree that successful educational organizations balance learning facts with practicing different kinds of skills; this essay will discuss my opinion.
To start with, scholars in all educational levels, from kindergarten and pre-schools to universities, have several responsibilities towards their students. Not only are they responsible to teach them scientific facts but also they are responsible to help them to interact with the society by developing their practical skills. In other words, learners have a double duty to feed their students with information and to play a parental role; they are more likely to know about student’s strength points and direct them to the proper skill. A prime example in this field is Finland; their educational system gives a great priority for students to have enough time to practice their skills. In conclusion, educational success comes with a balance between both sides, teaching and practicing what they learned.
To illustrate, practical skills help the students to find answers to their questions in the most effective way. This particular step helps in a different sensitive fields such as medical, research, musical and technology. This can be simplified in The Northern European countries; they lead the way when it comes to making the most of the skills of their people, and giving them the best educational opportunities. that there’s a lake in practical skills time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... learning, skills, values and believes. While some are believing that it is not enoug...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...skills, values and believes. While some are believing that it is not enough to depend on educ...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'field'?
Suggestion: field
...lar step helps in a different sensitive fields such as medical, research, musical and ...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...hem the best educational opportunities. that there’s a lake in practical skills time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38823529412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9865879871 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4247699193 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186369299898 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827764713146 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613200358084 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133605699867 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461513074622 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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