Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of Sports facilities facilities others however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few people vocalise that the ideal method for enhancing public health is by improving the amount of sports centres. Rest of the people believe that this will have a minor effect on Population's health and different means are to be introduced. I will shed light on both ideas.
Exercise is the key to a healthy lifestyle.First building more sports clubs will surely give birth to enormous amount of healthy activities which will be fun for almost all age groups. Secondly it will raise Awareness in individuals to live a fit life in addition to this sports is most famous among the youngsters this will result in teaching the kids that health is wealth from a very young age.
Constructing more clubs for different games also create opportunities for public to choose the sports which interest them the most so that they never get bored from playing and exercising.
Contrary to that others reckon that different ways should be launched for the same goal. On one hand diet is an important aspect for a healthier tomorrow, as they say "you are what you eat". On the other hand there are fast food takeaways in every Street corner. However this can be fixed by different procedures such as advertising in TVS and radios about the consequences eating junk food.
Europe has recently started to charge sugar tax on different fizzy drinks which lead to buying fresh fruit juices as they are cheaper and healthy.
Restaurants that provide healthy eatery should be taxed lesser compared to the ones which don't. I personally believe that sports activities and healthy eating goes side-by-side so awareness campaigns should be created to emphasize on health.
To sum up, the prime solution for elevation of Public Health is to multiply sports centres along with Awareness of better eating habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01328903654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58872427288 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3611048274 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183030654249 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644030723705 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499665425155 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829594767388 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652252768955 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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