Certain people think that computers have made life tough and complex while some believe that it has made our lives trouble-free. In my opinion, i agree that computers have made our personal and professional lives much easier and faster by providing us secure means to communicate with others and solve work related issues through internet.
Today almost every person has its own laptop or personal computer at home and at work. living without a computer these days is unimaginable. Firstly, In all offices, now a days work is done through computers, all professional communication is done through e-mails, rarely any paper work is involved.Secondly, sharing of data and information between employees is much simpler and more secure through computers. Thirdly maintaing records and updating information can be carried out very precisely and quickly.
Internet is one of the major factors why computers are so important in today's world. In addition to learning new things and studying different technologies, one can easily meet new people and communicate with friends and family through social networking sites like facebook and twitter.
On the other hand , it also has some negative effects on our lives, Sitting in front of a computer for a whole day in office can lead to various problems like fatigue, vision problems, back aches and stress. Children's health can also affected if they are addicted playing computer games and not doing physical activities.
In conclusion, I want to say that use of computers has become an integral part of our lives and this technology is more beneficial to us than harmful but at the same time it depends upon us how we correctly make use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247491638796 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.160535117057 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110367892977 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0635451505017 0.0501214627716 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0535117056856 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127090301003 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0635451505017 0.0403226058552 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81575487992 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167224080268 0.0326793684256 51% => OK
Particles: 0.00334448160535 0.00163938923432 204% => OK
Determiners: 0.0535117056856 0.0861772015684 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133779264214 0.021408717616 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0066889632107 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1697.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12635379061 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382671480144 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296028880866 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205776173285 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115523465704 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81575487992 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 77.1093238373 60.7387585426 127% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1818181818 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3278436282 49.517814964 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.272727273 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 0.814263465372 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.7847062685 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.57831325301 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335052614187 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0856195557806 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0670482059376 0.0668466124924 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621204590594 0.534860350844 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.218062997422 0.148594505496 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13228874215 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118470233358 0.0742795772207 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.186121130136 0.324371583561 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0327060344014 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19721286209 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130040588749 0.058150111329 224% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.