Technology is flourishing and providing us with new avenues of keeping ourselves updated the daily news, while fair amount of people believe that conventional way of reading newspaper will disappear. In my opinion, i completely disagree with the view that newspaper reading will disappear.
Their are many reasons why newspaper reading is still popular. Reading newspaper early in the morning has become an habit of most population. Affluent or middle class everyone will be desperately waiting for the newspaper to read it with a cup of tea. It is portable and cheap. You can easily carry it by keeping in bag where ever you go. secondly, We don't need electrical appliances or other sources to read it. It also helps you with easy way of reading where prolonged computerized reading effects our eye sight and eve after sometime we don't feel reading. It is available at economic price which gives opportunity for everyone to buy.
However, Technology tempts people with many new features. It provides videos which helps people in having clear view about the news piece. It also allows to share news with relatives and friends. people can also pretend as if they are working by just reading news in e-books when they don't want to work. No need to carry newspaper to where ever you go. Everyone can read news when ever they feel like reading.
To conclude, Technology may helps us to be updated but none is going to replace the benefits and feel good that newspaper provide to everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92885375494 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53737085799 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9285931128 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3529411765 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142179878498 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048576472435 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383866081065 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980298586972 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165490072572 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.