Some people say that failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough. To what extent do you agree?
Every individual in this world tries to reach their respective goals. While some people succeed in achieving their aims, others fail to achieve them because of many reasons. I believe that misfortune, despite the commitment, may occasionally be conditioned by bad luck or unfavourable circumstances.
Firstly, there are few people in this world who are blessed with success all the time, no matter they are committed or not. The main reason behind the success of such individuals is that they get help from rarely practised or non-traditional methods including luck. For instance, during my college days, I came across a person who used to study only selected topics and all the questions in the exams came from those topics only.
On the other hand, though people work hard to achieve their goals, some fail in attaining them. Every individual strives for success, but things do not always go in their favour and hence the individual has to face the consequences. A few years ago, for instance, researchers failed to find proper medicine for diseases such as cancer and AIDS despite giving their complete commitment. Failure is just part of life which every individual faces and needs to overcome them.
While success and failure come hand in hand to any individual, some people are so blessed that everything they touch turns into gold. In my opinion, if an individual does not achieve their goal, it doesn’t mean that the person lacks commitment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08298755187 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69458549026 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643153526971 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6739573367 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0742204158594 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292759140178 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338907275579 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484565026499 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213617173845 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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