Some people say that family is the most powerful influence in a child’s development. Other’s say that other factors such (television friend’s music etc.) play a greater role today. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Each child will be influenced by something or someone, and his development depends on factors he got influenced from. Some people say that family is the most major influence in a child’s development, others think the opposite and say that other factors will play this role.
On one hand, for some people to improve child’s development and learn more about life, the greater influence is family. First, parents are more experienced in life and have more knowledge, they can aid them to separate and know between the wrong and correct things to do. Second, spending more time with family, kids automatically will get influenced by one of them, they start acting talking and learning from this environment. Moreover, child try to develop his character according to the person he influenced him at home, and this one will be his idol. For example, I learned a lot from my family especially from my grandpa, he became my influencer, he assisted and taught me in developing my life. In my opinion I think that the family is the main factor in developing child’s way of living and his future.
On the other hand, several people say the opposite and think that child spend more time with friends and watching TV, these factors play a great role today in developing them. First, some believe that playing with friends, help them understand how others think, act and how life is going. Second, kids will stay home at early ages with parents before moving to schools, where the role of other environment begin and where child get in touch and have close conversations with friends and teachers. However, television and music also help kids to know new languages and learn how to spell words and expand his accent, additionally they can have more knowledge about things happening outside their culture. For example, my cousin first world (Cow) came from watching education programs on the television and his language is still improving. From my side I believe that friends or television can play a role but cannot be the main influencers of development.
In conclusion, people say that family is the important role in developing child, others say the opposite and other factors can play this part such as friends or television. In my opinion, family is the basic influencer to help child to improve rather than friends or television they can come after in others stages in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93300248139 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.619278017 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478908188586 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.8244210966 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336482420749 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134905528675 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138385887265 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267839185968 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115549781256 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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