Write about the following topic.
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Computer these days is one of the major technology that each person should have at his home or work. Computer for some people can have negative impacts more than positive on children. That's why several people agree and disagree with this point of view.
On one hand, computer for children is a waste of time and will cause health problems for some. Spending hours on the computer will effect on the children's study at school and won't concentrate anymore in class or listen to the explanations. Second, it will cause health problems, where it will harm their eyes and lead to wear eye glasses at early age, it will increase the level of stress if they are playing video games that need concentration. For example, studies show that kids must not use the computer more than 1 hour per day, since it will damage their eyes and lead to miss-communication between one family. In my opinion, I agree that computer will cause negative impacts and is a waste of time, where children can enjoy other activities rather than sitting in-front of the screen.
On the other hand, computer is the technology that we must follow and stay up to date with; some think that it have positive effects. Kids must know and learn everything especially at this century where everything is connected to computers and technology. For some people, if a children know how to use a computer, he is a smart and genius kid. Second, some parents prefer their children to stay home and play video games or browse the internet, instead of hanging out and pay money, in this way they can feel safe that he's still with them at home. For example, my friend parents brought for him a computer when he was 7 years old, to stay at home and stop nagging on them, where they will have more free time to go out alone. From my side, I disagree with this point and I believe that parents should spend more time with their children and make them feel that they are loved.
As a conclusion, people have different views at this point, some agree that computer will have negative effect and others disagree. In my opinion, I believe that computer is a must at home, but for working purpose, where kids can enjoy their free time playing with friends, doing sport activities or spending time with their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...impacts more than positive on children. Thats why several people agree and disagree w...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...me. Spending hours on the computer will effect on the childrens study at school and wo...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ers and technology. For some people, if a children know how to use a computer, he is a sma...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ey, in this way they can feel safe that hes still with them at home. For example, m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6253101737 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35796517228 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471464019851 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9566103533 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224569692908 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964981945112 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795173882049 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174141102125 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667479019443 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.