some people say it is important to keep home and offices clean, what is your opinion and give relevant reasons and examples from your personal experience.
Some demographics believe it is crucial to make your residence and office neat and all things neatly arranged in their rightful places and I opine it is essential to do so for health and safety reasons.
On the one hand, health issues is one important factor why there is a need to keep environment clean.Dirty and disorganized place of abode is one rudiment to endangered health which can lead to fatal consequences. When homes are not clean, it encourages microorganism-causing diseases such as bacteria and viruses to invade and attack peoples immunity thereby lowering their resistance to sicknesses and resulting in an unwanted ailments. A recent survey was carried out in the northern part of Nigeria to know the root cause of the recent cholera outbreak and three regions were selected for the survey, namely; Kano, Sokoto and Jigawa. The results showed that majority of the households were reported unclean and most importantly the environments were littered with refuse and bushy with overgrown grasses. The drainages were significantly blocked and gave access to mosquitoes to breed resulting into malaria causing plasmodium to attack residents, this is also the major cause of cholera outbreak in all the regions assessed.
On the other hand, safety is also key reason why where people live and work should be hygienically clean and put in order. Things need to be arranged properly to avoid accidents at home because any form of obstruction can cause stumbling. Neatly, arranged homes and offices are also aesthetical to behold. When it comes to retrieval of items or articles, it is easy to access stuffs kept because the exact location is known which also makes it less stressful and faster.
In conclusion, some people believe it is preeminent that your home and where you work should be free of dirts and chronologically arranged and i strongly support the opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Dirty
...ere is a need to keep environment clean.Dirty and disorganized place of abode is one ...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ailment'?
Suggestion: ailment
...sicknesses and resulting in an unwanted ailments. A recent survey was carried out in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13268608414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87325427302 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9295281577 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.181818182 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160746765439 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586010633202 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530804292029 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106383138242 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446273321626 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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