Some people say that it is important to keep our home and workplace tidy with everything organized and at correct place. what is your opinion about this?
Everyone has the intention to keep things well arranged whether it could be work or at home. keeping objects or daily drivers at a correct place would benefit an individual every day. In my opinion, it's completely acceptable that making things organized at the workplace and house will have self-satisfaction and peace and also it helps us in not stacking up the work for upcoming days. This essay will further outline the details of organizing everything at all times.
To embark on, it is acceptable that all get tired when they go through a busy working day, and no one want to work after working hours they just pile up their minimal works that need attention at home and their own desks. if we don't organize the things and they look awkward, bizarre, and scattered all the time and if someone notices the same it makes them feel awful about us. we need to be aware of situations occurring around us, if we find our things such as pens or awards we owned are not well places on our work tables we need to take care of them, keep them clean and check whether something is missing or if they are not in the right place or it might disturb us and make a bad impression about us.
However, our parents will be always with us at home. But, people who live a bachelor life or away from own land should be attentive about their own particulars and valuables. if at all they lose them its very hard to get any item back at places where we are anonymous. our own room need to be well organized so that we would feel peaceful and a feeling of satisfaction fills our heart that everything is neat and clean. if we see a mess around our house we might disturb emotionally sometimes. For instance, a survey on a group of people who work and return their homes after hectic day often wish that someone always keeps their home clean and tidy which makes them relax as if they see an untidy room or workplace desk they lose their control and feel disappointed.
In conclusion, according to me it is individuals responsibility to take care of cleaning and maintaining their workplace aesthetics, no one would help or support them in that, and we should not completely push it on to our family members to keep our homes neat and shining we should spend our time in helping them nonetheless our busy schedule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49880668258 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48545990726 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508353221957 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.1722127272 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.642857143 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9285714286 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241846039141 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964654795659 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413944114673 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161463158056 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599413902608 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.