Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What's your opinion about this?
Nowadays, the government of every country are promoting "clean country moment" to spread the awareness to keep their living place and nation clean. Few people think it is mandatory to keep the things in the right place and clean their office and house for better management. In my perspective I think it is necessary for the people to keep their surroundings neat and organised whenever possible, however, there may be certain cases where we cannot expect these every time.
There many positives by keeping your environment clean and in order. Firstly, there is a famous proverb " Cleanliness is next to godliness" which means if a place is clean and tidy, there is an indication of god living there. For example, In India, people tend to clean their place at least thrice in a day as they believe in that having everything organised and perfect will motivate to gain more money. Secondly, by organising and keep everything neat will help you to develop good discipline and management skills. It will not only help you but also people around you as well like kids. Lastly, keeping things in place will help you remember in case, if you need it urgently, for example: In a library, if you ask the librarian about a certain book he can give you out with the exact location and place this because of good organising skills.
Having said that, there are instances where clean and organising is not a very big thing. For instance, there are jobs like investigating agent where things not always neat and not organised, for example, If you consider the detectives or agents who are investigating a case, their office are always filled with people's documents and reports spread across everywhere thus it cannot tidy always.
To sum up, some people believe it is must be required to keep their living and working place organised clean and correct place. I feel it is important to keep your things clean, however, it is not possible to keep everything in place always.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
... you but also people around you as well like kids. Lastly, keeping things in place w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his because of good organising skills. Having said that, there are instances wh...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ot possible to keep everything in place always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89644970414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61046184545 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.20973091 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232429136635 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963853412231 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732424805452 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157619930358 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105658681388 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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