Some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while
others say it is the government’s primary role.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Environment has become a major talking point in recent time because of global warming. While one of the main responsibilities of government is to protect the government, individuals should also take responsibility of keeping the environment clean. This essay will discuss why both government and individual should contribute equally to keep our environment healthy
To begin with, on one side of the coin, government plays a pivotal role to make sure that our environment is clean and healthy. In most countries, big factories and private cars are responsible for air pollution since they release a lot of carbon-di-oxide in the air which also contributes to global warming. For instance, In Delhi, Because of carbon-di-oxide omission from big factories, air has become so polluted that people can not breath and they have to wear mask to defend them against air pollution. Government can impose strict rule which will make sure that big factories and cars do not release a lot of carbon di oxide in the air. Additionally, they can set up an environment protection agency for the safety of our environment.
On the other side, Individuals also have big responsibilities towards government. Firstly, People can start using recycle bag instead of using polythene because polythene can be harmful for environment. Secondly, they should keep our houses and roads clean by putting all the wastes in public bin. Moreover, people can also plant more trees which can protect us from air pollution
To conclude, environment is the most important thing in our life. If we can keep our environment healthy and clean, we can live longer. While government has a major role of protecting the environment, it is also individual duty to preserve the environment. In my opinion, government and individual should share responsibilities to keep our environment healthy and green.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'can not breathe'?
Suggestion: can not breathe
... air has become so polluted that people can not breath and they have to wear mask to defend th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13729536739 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5781507953 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181294321604 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769667757396 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664300750979 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134152377907 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650157428124 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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