It has recently discussed that people's outfits show their culture and believes as well as their characteristics. I partially disagree with this view, as today there are many factors which lead to change in people's appearance despite their culture and origins.
To begin with, it should be said that every society has their own style of clothing completely related to their culture and based on the idea of past generation. It seems that in some parts of the world people are still trying to keep their customs. In my country, for example, there are some cities in which people prefer to have their traditional costumes to show their great antiquity to others and they are proud of such conservative thought and feeling.
On the other hand, in today's modern world, people are tempting to change their style to be more comfortable and fashion. Apparently, in fashion industry, the tendency is towards special clothes with the features of being light and as comfortable as possible. Most people are satisfied with this new way of life. In addition, nowadays people are completely engaged with new technologies, social media and satellite to be aware of new attitudes towards a better life. Hence, it is not surprising to see that big change in others' appearances. In fact, it is almost impossible to know about someone's culture and character in this way unless some limited areas where the residents still have some biased points of view.
In conclusion, I believe that, people are trying to ease the burdens and have new attitudes towards life. In another word, some old traditions are giving way to new lifestyles which make people feel free. Based on the points provided above, I almost disagree with this statement as I see the prevailing strong tendency to freedom and independence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00668896321 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63467893537 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5505479467 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191336628019 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070740227029 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489867651202 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130115839796 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422419807574 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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