Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Diverse cultures and traditions have evolved since time immemorial. These cultures are transcending boundaries as a result of globalization. A certain category of individuals feel that the culture and character can be deduced based on the style, the way one dresses himself/herself. However, I strongly feel that though it is slightly possible to identify the culture based on the clothing, it should not be the base to judge one’s character.
It is quite inevitable that dress can reflect the culture and tradition. This is because every individual culture has its own indigenous sartorial style. For instance, Sikhs have a turban robed around their head which is their identity. Likewise women practicing Islamic religion thoroughly, venture out in Burkhas. So, these particular choice of clothes and style leads to conclude upon their culture and tradition, but it does not aid to specify their character.
Character is defined by one’s own personality, based on one’s ethics and virtues. The thought process and behavior of each person varies from one another. Judging one’s character by his attire would definitely lead to astray. Consider an example of an insurgent or an anti-social person. His mind is hardwired to indulge in illegal activities and terrorism. Though he conceals this under decent, formal or usual clothing as others, his intention towards the society are cruel and his probable actions could definitely cripple the society. Hence, I feel if he was judged by his clothes as a law abiding citizen, that would be a definite mislead. Therefore clothes should not be the deciding factor on which a person’s character is based.
In conclusion, even though assumption of traditions and cultures can be derived from the sense of clothing, it should not be enlisting their features to conclude upon individual's character. The dressing style can possibly be just an identity but does not reveal the true character of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33974358974 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92692616553 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8565989073 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6842105263 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18526789543 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585695686491 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392343602918 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114767178882 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00637013011957 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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