Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
A majority of people, gauge others based on their outer appearance and selection of clothing. I strongly disagree with this biased way of sizing an individual on the mere assumption of their personality and personal choices. In this essay, I would like to discuss the ambiguity involved in doing so.
Humans are social animals that have categorized society into different sections. People base their perceptions on their past experiences. A person who is traditionally dressed is often assumed to be a very pious person who is homely and introverted. This may not be true in every case. However, there are a number of people whose profession demands a certain dress code and have to abide by it. For examples, National Airlines have a specific uniform for their cabin crew, irrespective of their cultural background.
Some people choose comfort clothing or enjoy experimenting with the prevalent fads and fashions. A woman's choice of a western outfit which may be skimpy or body-hugging is often judged as extroverted or attention-seeking. These individuals are classified as uncultured or accused of possessing a weak value system. For instance, some perceive young men with colored highlights in their hair and tattoos to be less successful in their career.
In conclusion, people are able to make a roughly accurate judgment of other members of society, based on their temporary superficial conditions. Having said that, I do believe that it is not always possible to acquire a lot of information about others unless we make an effort to know them personally. Furthermore, we cannot confirm ones' true nature based on specific circumstances and limited experiences. This could lead to misunderstandings and misconceptions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... People base their perceptions on their past experiences. A person who is traditionally dressed ...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to comfort'
Suggestion: to comfort
...tural background. Some people choose comfort clothing or enjoy experimenting with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18013669855 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7393144703 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0588235294 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213767353767 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547692819289 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471576338347 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115409289921 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124366581086 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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