Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is commonly observed that a person's character and culture can be described from their selection of clothing. I somewhat disagree with this notion as character does not depend on clothes; however, clothes can help in identifying one person culture as well.
First of all, character is not defined based on a person's clothes. It should be only analyzed by a person's actions. This is because as plethora of people wear expensive and attractive clothes but they can be dishonest in nature and can also be involved in criminal activities. A clear example of this is a notorious businessman Nirav Modi who used to wear high-priced clothes and diamond accessories. He cheated many public banks in India and investors from international companies. Therefore, it is quite important to consider actions and qualities of someone before making any assumptions about someone character instead of analyzing it via their clothes.
On the other hand, it is true to say that clothes also represents the diversification across the globes. To be precise, clothes help to understand people's cultural backgrounds, traditions, religions and languages. As per statistics, people who wear light-colored clothing come from a family who believe in non-violence whereas people who prefer dark-colored clothes come from a tradition who have faith in their religion. Another example is about people in India who wear different clothing to explain the religious or cultural beliefs and also to share their origins. Hence, choices of clothes by people is a great approach to know about someone's culture.
In conclusion, I somewhat disagree with the belief of making judgement based on clothes about people as clothes cannot speak someone bad and good qualities along with their behavior with others whereas a person's choices of outfits express about his or her cultural aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31756756757 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89529195173 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3296945531 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257980166831 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961751841935 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577536298872 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172122370493 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355422414787 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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