All over the world,people used to wear various types of garments based on their culture and geographic location. Few people believe that, it is predictable ones behavior, habits and culture from their clothes. Although, many people might discard this claim,However I absolutely concur with this perspective and I will provide the justification and evidences to validate my birds eye view.
To begin with, people generally wear garments based on their ancestors traditions and whether conditions. Hence, It is no exaggeration, indeed feasible to guess culture because the person in bound to dress up considering climatic situation. For Instance, the people who are sheltered in ice cold places like Canada, Australia choose their garments sewing with wool which are inherited from their forefathers. Their garments are resembles to their culture and traditions. Secondly, If we consider India, is a secular country, is the origin for various cultures, where people are following various costumes and we can identify their origin based on their dressing style.
Furthermore, These days, people are able to measure one's behavior and character from their attire.Physiologists are became experts these days to draw an opinion based on the appearance, and in most of the scenarios they became succeeded. For example, In India, if a person appeared in traditional clothes says that he is from Orthodox family and the person in western clothes says he is fashion freak and updated with trends. Where as, these days youngsters are being crazy towards western culture and started wearing outrageous clothes. This change is wiping the cultural diversity and threat for one's own culture.
To Sum up, It is evident that, we can draw an opinion and impression about the character and roots based on the dressing style. And proved that, Our appearance speaks louder than our voice. But, the western culture craziness and globalization vanishing the cultural diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4006514658 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84696516757 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3841307106 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238428999998 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831504838431 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483291418389 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140416490594 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346207180471 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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