Loss of ecosystem is the paramount environmental problem of nowadays, as others believe there are more crucial environmental challenges. This essay agrees that there are different things humans do which is affecting our ecosystem nowadays. Secondly, discusses other things that are crucial than the environment itself.
The environment and different species like animals as well as plants are interdependent. Environmental degradation result in loss of biodiversity.In addition, this degradation result in falling of trees and eventually they will die. Planta emit oxygen which is needed by animals and human beings. Morever, the end result is that animals less oxygen and polluted air as it reduces its life expectancy. Trees absorb carbon dioxide or carbon monoxide. Nowadays there is global warming which is due to loss of plants. Industries and cars emit polluted air hence there are no trees to trap that air as this result in changes in weather patterns.
Furthermore, poaching of animals is also a major concern to the environment. Corruption between the parks officers and poor maintanance of game parks result in poaching of animals. Animal species play a vital role in the ecosystem as they takein oxygen from the plants and release oxygen needed by the plants for photosynthesis. They play a big role in managing the environment for example if we visit a park or zoo the plants are healthy as I believe animals are good carers of the environment.
In addition, increase in population cause a rise in demand for land.Deforestation is the other concern as it result in exstinction of animals.People cut down trees to prepare land for cultivation and even housing. These challenges challenges are leading to natural disasters like floods and cyclones. Looking back in the 1800s people were not industrialised and modernised and there was equilibrium between animal species and plants.They never had challenges we are facing today because they took good care of their environment.
However, due to modernisation as well as industrialisation it is necessary to create industries and modern houses which are spacious. Population is growinng and disease patterns are changing, therefore there is need for space for human beings at the expense of animals and plants. Technology is moving and increase demand on needs and wants, therefore people should be industrialised. Killing of animals that are a threat to the humankind is necessary as to save human population.
In my opinion, I believe things we are doing nowadays is causing loss of ecosystem. Industrialisation cause emmision of carbon monoxide which is affecting plants and animals.Deforestation leaves our animals vulnerable and less plants to takeup gases from cars and industries as this cause global warming. It is also resulting in more natural disasters like cyclones or floods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19428579316 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473333333333 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0828204557 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163327376495 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464837036945 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514132634285 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907017393081 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514707196279 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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