Undeniably, everyone in the world desire for happiness. There subsists many sources of happiness but some people believe that having a great deal f money outweigh all of them. This essay will explore constructive arguments to showcase how many can make people happy and the other factors involved apart from money that can make a person contented.
Admittedly, every single object comes with a price which can only be paid via money. Happiness that comes from materialistic products can only be achieved by paying its amount. A luxury car, for instance, which can make someone happiest can only be bought by money. Happiness is not only linked with goods but also the satisfaction. The contentment that money brings with itself is unmatchable. For example, a person having a lot of money is more satisfied when it comes to his children's education and future in comparison to the person who is lacking it and as a result lies low on contentment scale.
Be that as it may, there subsists tremendous other factors that can make one joyful. Spending time with family and friends can make someone happiest at times. A recent news featuring the richest man of the country said in an interview that he enjoys the most when he is with his friends. Another positive known aspect that guarantees happiness is good health. Unhealthy person despite having a treasure of gold cannot enjoy life to the fullest. For example, an old man in my neighbor go for a long run twice a day which makes him extremely delightful.
By and large, happiness chooses different ways of coming into your life. It totally depends on person which way of happiness they select for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89045936396 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59686303766 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8979678533 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383613561403 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110043421467 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790998169793 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22826222681 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825804970129 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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