Some people think that music is beneficial in uniting people with different age and cultural background. I fully agree with this opinion that music is good in connecting all people with various cultures and age backgrounds.
Firstly, music is one of the art forms. As a part of art, it can be appreciated by anyone, including by those who have different backgrounds from the artists. For instance, a lot of young people love listening to Rock n' Roll, which was popular in the 1950s, where some older people fond of listening to Electronic music which is known as today's music. When they gather together through music community or music concert, they will connect easily because they have same interests.
Secondly, music can be used to communicate something, including to unite people. This is because it is usually written carefully and earnestly by the artists. For the example, a song entitled "Heal the World" by Michael Jackson was written to encourage people to unite and make a world as a better place, something which many have forgotten to do. Millions of people with different backgrounds understood the message and were touched, then finally decided to improve the situation of this world.
To conclude, I strongly agree that music is useful in bringing lot of people from various backgrounds because it can be appreciated by anyone, and it can communicate a message to unite people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0686695279 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74051726773 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536480686695 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5733866218 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3467391595 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137591870083 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13078413626 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232467720608 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159403739399 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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