Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do you agree or disagree?
Music is considered an effective procedure to terminate the dissociation of people from different cultural backgrounds and ages group. According to my point of view, the role of music in this instance is still a point of contention, I will mention some explanations to make it clear in the following essay
On the one hand, there is no doubt that music can eliminate the culture and ages separation. To advocate, firstly people can broaden their knowledge about counterpart country through some kinds of music. In fact, many implications and images are inserted into the music, which can access any region or country. For instance, Vietnamese people can absorb the diverse culture of Korea after listening to their songs. Secondly, music has the ability to connect with people of all ages. Music is also a stress reliever that helps individuals relax when they are in a stressful circumstance. For example, music is played at a concern or a party where different age groups enjoy the moment together, discussing the rhythm, the beat
On the other hand, music cannot connect individuals from non-identical cultures and ages. Apparently, some features of music do not suitable for a certain of people. The most compelling evidence is violent music, this kind of sound properly not acceptable for children. Besides, the more and more sexual scene was brought in music product, which destroy the effort of tertiary education. For example, student achievement is to become a people with morals and rules, however bad images from music videos could have a harmful effect on their thinking
In conclusion, Music appears to have the ability to bring people closer together in some circumstances, while it tends to have the opposite effect in others
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74485107947 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7747370437 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307191604009 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11126468404 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636319779339 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192395007572 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287617954788 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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