Some people say that in order for hobby to be interesting, it should be hard to learn. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that in order for hobby to be interesting, it should be hard to learn.
Practising hobbies has become an indispensable part of every one’s life. While some individuals are of the belief that such activities ought to be difficult, others are opponents of this assertion. Personally, I entirely agree with the latter opinion and my explanations will be discussed.
On the one hand, advocates of this idea often assume that hobbies have to be tough owing to some reasons. Initially, as well as youngsters opt for choosing challenging activities, they will be more eager to acquire new skills, however, the case might be the opposite when they are well- informed about what they learn. Additionally, if individuals are incubated in new things, they will be excited to achieve unprecedented results in order to prove that they are successful. A case in point is research by Singapore University ascertained that around 95% of tertiary students who organized extracurricular activities were afraid and deskilled; however, upon arduous efforts, not only did they become leaders, but also decision makers.
On the other hand, I concur that everyone has their own interests; therefore, I believe that hobbies have to be accessible for numerous reasons. Firstly, while each individual have their own desires, endorsing their distinctive skills through easy hobbies has become inevitably of paramount significance to enrich their self-confidence. Secondly, choosing interesting hobbies will not only contribute to positively recharging player’s batteries, but also improving their psychological statues. This is exemplified by an article published in the Times magazine found out that 90 % of exhausted employees forgot their hardships after playing chess at weekends.
To conclude, despite the fact that people have different views whether to choose hard or easy hobbies, I am inclined to believe that individuals have to select easy ones to feel confident and pleasant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to challenge'.
Suggestion: to challenge
... as well as youngsters opt for choosing challenging activities, they will be more eager to ...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to interest'.
Suggestion: to interest
...eir self-confidence. Secondly, choosing interesting hobbies will not only contribute to pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0711335202 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2551124091 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153706595394 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768323229593 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129840745207 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12594580514 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157940661756 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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