Some people say that staying in a hotel in a foreign country on a holiday is not the best way to know about the country and people. discuss your opinion.
It is an irrefutable fact that, to know about a place well, you need to live there. Many people visit other countries and just relax in the accommodation. Masses advocate that staying in suites will not help in knowing about the people or that nation. I stand on the same side of those people who quote that living among four walls is not the way to learn about others. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion with relevant illustrations and reason
First of all, going to a holiday is an interesting and exiting experience. The main reason people go to a vacation will be for relaxation and to shun the stress from work. Although, trips are mainly to mitigate the tensions, people will get to know about the country's culture and experience the behavior of people of that country. Populace pay a huge amount of money to enjoy the nature as well as travel of that country, these will be spoiled if a person is not willing to come out of the boarding. I am sure that going outside of the lodging will help people to understand that country and make new friends there. In short, exploring those nations will be an enjoyable and adventurous experience
Another point worth consider is, if the person stays at hotel, they can miss the flavors of that countries cuisines. As food and music is an integral part of the nation’s culture, it is vital to experience them when you are there. In my experience, being to other countries is an opportunity to learn about the food and wild. Despite that many countries speak different languages, communicating with them is a challenging task, but the recent technological advancements demolished the barriers of language and made the world a global village.
All things consider, it is completely preposterous to stay in a hotel in a non native country for a break. It is like staying in your own bed room. If I need to know about the country the only option I got is to experience it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'pays'.
Suggestion: pays
...ior of people of that country. Populace pay a huge amount of money to enjoy the nat...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t is like staying in your own bed room. If I need to know about the country the on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, in short, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62682215743 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69005066864 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545189504373 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5033600937 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303992736267 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103125875296 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601552283951 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19608137651 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644153174719 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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