Some people say success in a person's life as an adult is the result of the way he was brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Definition of success in one's life as an adult varies for each individual, however, it is the outcome of the way a person is raised by his parents. Personally, I completely agree with this assertion as upbringing includes multiple aspects that are crucial to lead a successful life and most of those are inherited from the parents.
A successful adult is the one who is physically fit, mentally healthy, emotionally strong and socially active. Here, parents play a vital role to provide a healthy environment for a child at home and cultivate good habits within kids to mold its personality. Parents are an influential role model for a child, likely to adopt life skills from them. Ethical behavior, positive attitude, well organize, discipline, hard work are few examples of values which kids learn from the elders. These values bring out the fundamental goodness of a person. Overall, mother and father inculcate long-term habits and personality trait within kids.
Undoubtedly, an excellent education is one of the key factors in climbing the ladder of success while growing old. By admitting a child into renowned school and college wherein qualified teachers coach kids on life skills and soft skills, parents are securing its educational and personal growth. Add to it, discovering a hidden talent in a kid and nurturing it by enrolling in advanced classes and encouraging to excel in it is also something father and mother look after as the kid grows. It means, the parents make all necessary arrangements during childhood and guide the young kid on each footstep to shape his professional life.
In conclusion, parents carve kid's character by assisting and guiding him in each phase of life from an infant to an adult. Parents nurture a raw child into a successful adult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Definition of success in ones life as an adult varies for each indivi...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'excelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: excelling
...ing in advanced classes and encouraging to excel in it is also something father and moth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06440677966 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79759818192 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3074871552 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188809565731 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699142720941 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668068786492 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136863070675 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761815870212 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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