Some people say team sports (football) have lots of benefits. Others say Individual sports (swimming, tennis) are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, playing sports are become more and more polular and play an important role in our life so there are some conflicting opinions about which is more significant: team sports or individual sports. This essay will examine both view and give a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, it is resonable that team sports bring about numerous advantages. At first, playing team sports help to form and development life skills. It is a good chance to improve our personalities such as cooperation and communication. For instance, football players not only play a game but also make strong connections with each other since they learn how to trust and understand each other. Moreover, when people play team sports, they can have a great chance to meet new people. They not only meet their teammates but also players from other teams that they compete with. As a result, individuals can expand their network, which is very advantageous to their career.
On the other hand, individual sports have several merits. Firstly, we can have the right to decide everything like time, place so that we can feel more comfortable. Beside that, during the outbreak of Covid, playing individual sport can helps to avoid infection. Second, individual sports give participants better chances to push themselves. This means that they have to establish goals and create new personal records. For example, when swimming, people can set up the goal they want to achieve and do it themselves without friends or teammates.
In conclusion, team sports and individual sports are both good but it is essential that players have to choose the one that suitable for them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0479704797 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64283420784 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4459681412 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282734861517 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978235480698 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736236721394 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191375082828 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335796589907 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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