On which occasions public should spend money has become topic of debate today. While some people believe that spending money on sports and cultural events is detrimental, others consider it as a positive development. Although according to some these expenses are nonpositive, in this paper I will express benefits of this spending for society.
First and Foremost, buying passes for national sports competitions promote social unity. For instance, when people go to watch live cricket match at a stadium by spending own money on tickets, they start cheering up for team who is representating their country. This way unknowingly majority of people present at that venue start promoting their respective country team and this type of conductive environment is beneficial for country's unity. Thus, I think if people are spending money on watching sport events, it neither
harms society nor national integrity rather it promotes it.
Secondly, expenses that we do on cultural events are actually for the conservation of our heritage. For example, as we spend money buying cultural show tickets, it actully get invested towards preservation of that art for our future generations. At Jaipur, a cultural hub for India people can enjoy real Rajasthani dance by paying for. If people stop appreciating this art by not buying tickets for such shows, there will be no-one to perform such dances in future. Therefore, people get motivated to learn heritage arts if are some career opportunities otherwise they become part of history.
In conclusion, though people spend money on some events, these spendings prove beneficial for society in long term. Additionally, these type of engagements are good for people to support livelyhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8019942946 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0943265381 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331290411516 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121185818777 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689793687373 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179589412253 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101469477179 0.056905535591 178% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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