Some people tend to commit crimes, is the society to blame?
what are the causes, and who is the responsible?
Almost all societies have their fair share of people with shady characters and broken moral compasses. Thereby, one of the scourges of the world in which we live is the abundance of criminal activities. Given the aforementioned facts, the question arises as to what are the causes and who is to blame. This essay seeks to investigate the reasons for this trend as well as to indicate who is responsible parties.
Although there are a plethora of reasons as to why one might commit a crime, I believe some of them such as lack of education and poor financial situation are the main causes. One cannot deny the role of money in our world. Many of those who are not fortunate enough to have adequate wealth or proper education are forced to enter the criminal life in order to survive. Research shows the majority of petty thieving cases are committed by less educated who come from poor backgrounds.
While finding causes of a problem is admittedly hard, finding the responsible party is even harder. The debate of whether the society and its values should be changed or the fact that individuals should be responsible for their behaviors can continue for ages. However, no one can disregard that both the former and the latter have a significance. I believe everyone should contribute to the community to help those in need. And, the fact that our society has not taken a deep look into its core values and has not altered them as needed, makes it responsible for the unfortunate outcomes. On the other hand, I also think people are responsible for their actions. One should always tread on the right side of the law, no matter how hard the situation.
By the way of conclusion, there are multitude reasons for committing crimes. However, based on the mentioned reasons, both the society and individuals are equally responsible for this trend.
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Comments
P1L4: Correction: who the
P1L4: Correction: who the responsible parties are.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while, as to, such as, as well as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83018867925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63947960345 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2714585621 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3529411765 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255317501945 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660690597166 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527489674005 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140836060728 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324326545721 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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