Some people thing that watching sports is waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?
Sport is one of the major parts of media industry which attracts lot of viewer to it. Often young generation is tends to watch sports and they spend hours of their free time in watching sports on television. I completely agree with this view .
It is not practically possible to attend the live session of sports at ground for juveniles and hence all over the world people can enjoy the sport happening in any corner of the world can sit and watch peacefully at home. Watching sports does has merits such as it motivates the children to play also observing game carefully improve their understanding about the sport. Sport provides much more significant knowledge to its follower about various aspects such as team spirit and avenues to handle the pressure during the peak time of game. Watching it for hours is really not good practice as it consumes lot of time of adults.
Although, there are multifarious benefits of watching sports during the leisure time the demerits cannot be overlooked. Sedentary lifestyle offers more disadvantages such as obesity and dullness and dearth of activeness. Instead if the teenagers spend their leisure time to play the sport in reality on ground it will be more fruitful for them. It will assist them to understand the skills which they perhaps gain by spending time watching it.
To Sum, leisure time should be used to make more imperative thing such as playing game on the courts than just spending time in watching it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.936 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51544963481 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1099736447 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286775593198 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109207973623 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601112589352 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185456508385 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00872537096184 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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