Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words
There is an opinion that the young generation should do volunteer work to contribute their help to the community. For me, I agree that teenagers should work in society is a great idea but this should be in the environment in which they feel willing to belong, not be compulsory.
On the one hand, working as a volunteer will bring many advantages to young people in terms of school, society and experiments. Those people who want to develop themself in both physically and mentally, contributing their help to local communities is definitely a great opportunity to do that. They not only learn knowledge from work but they also improve their life skills such as how to deal with difficulties or how to cooperate with other people. This is very helpful for them in future when they find a job that requires various skills.
On the other hand, teenagers should be free to choose what they like to do in their leisure time. Inspire of creating more opportunities for students to satisfy their hobbies, forcing them to do what they dislike is a crucial activity relevant to ethics in communities. Furthermore, if they compel them to spend their time on doing unpaid work, they will find it is unfair among them and doing it with the frustrating and not willing behavior, it even leads to some bad results to society.
In conclusion, the choice of whether helping the society or not, it belongs to teenagers, but I strongly believe that we should not require them to do work which they are not interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75285171103 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65969513803 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3432332174 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384373030236 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157457267818 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784298778345 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242944695503 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498351542502 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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