This topic raises a major concern in the university study system which is highly discussed all around to whether it allows the student to choose the subject of their choice which is the result, increase their interest in education and make them more productive. some pundits agree while others beg to differ. however, I think it is always better to learn the subjects that have relevance in the future. This essay will discuss both the views before coming to a definitive conclusion.
To begin with, Some people believe that college students should be given the privilege to choose their subjects. Usually, subjects for a particular course is decided by university only but if the students are given an opportunity which will make education more effective. For instance, Ram has more interest in dealing with data analytics so he can pursue a course in statistics without any restriction from university to obstruct him from his interest.
On the other hand, due to initiatives like digital India, some people argue that kids should be forceful to take the courses related to science and technology rather than their student's interests. In their view, when students complete their course they have a thorough knowledge of that area. Moreover, It is believed that due to globalization, the world will more focus on science and technology in the future. So, it is certainly believed that students should be involved in correlating to these subjects so they can adapt to future circumstances and develop themselves.
To conclude, since many people are against studying core subjects; however, it is always better to study these subjects that can be utilized in their future to make their fundamental strong for a successful future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12720848057 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67908380651 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2077422116 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353594486272 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119960862137 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713401819022 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198758524126 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551061202314 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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