Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Few people are of the opinion that every university should let the students study whatever they like. However, some feel that students should be only allowed to study subjects that will help them in the future like topics related to science and technology.
In the first place, the current world does not care much about the job role. There are all sorts of jobs in the place and equal respect for every job. The days are long gone when a person will be tagged respectable if they are a lawyer, doctor, or an engineer. These days, students follow their passion. There are more people in entertainment, music, and art, sports, painting, sculpture, and many more. Today's generation believes in working in their hobby field so that they do not feel work pressure holding them down. They feel like going to work cause they enjoy their job and are not forced to.
Coming to the point where people feel that students should be taught only topics related to science and technology, it makes sense on the pay scale. These jobs are not only well established but have outstanding pay. People have more streamlined promotions and are handsomely paid. The job timings are also only forty hours in a week. Therefore, people have more time to explore other hobbies like traveling, cooking, singing to name a few. This helps them to have two separate lives, like one where they have to work to sustain themselves and then they have a life which they do to relax. This way, they not only have the option to change their hobby as per their desire but also they never feel their hobby is a burden.
In conclusion, though both opinions have their own merits and demerits, I feel universities should not limit imparting knowledge only to science and technology. It is an institution where students come to learn more on the subject they want to and in the end, it is their call whether they wish to pursue a career in the same or not. However, limiting knowledge only to a few fields is not desirable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65527065527 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3309196509 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7356264111 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35904305248 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108109971749 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115093700813 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26804618938 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17988606115 0.056905535591 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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