Nowadays, people have different views about the importance of learning art in school. While some people argue that art is not a prominent subject for students' academic achievement. I believe that every student should take art curriculum at school.
Undoubtedly, most schools focus on practical knowledge such as science and mathematics. They believe these subjects are the cornerstones of modern technological concepts learning which helps children have a competitive edge and have more job opportunities. Additionally, these subjects also be regard as a tool for students to achieve their success in their future careers.
In spite of these arguments, I deeply believe that art is a necessary subject for students to developer their skills and interest. From my prosepective, art can not only stimulate students' creativity and imagination but also help them to express their ideas and feelings creatively. It is a challenge for students to demonstrate what they think about as a drawing. Apparently, learning art is also an useful way to inspire their conception. Furthermore, learning arts provides children a chance to release pressure from in-class tests. If student suffer from mental issues, this will undoubtedly minimize learning efficiency. In other words, students might not learn effectively in useful subjects without any entertainment such as art and music.
To summarize, I fully support that school should not remove art curriculum, otherwise children will lose opportunity to dig out their interest and release pressure. With art courses, children can maintain positive physical and mental health condition.
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and your opinion. 78
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and your opinion. 61
- Writing Task 2 (an essay)Some people think that children should learn to paint or draw at school. Others believe it is just a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...awing. Apparently, learning art is also an useful way to inspire their conception....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, so, while, such as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61133603239 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01600140676 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6785240958 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225832228631 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816773534017 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535516871195 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14260874767 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654065455321 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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