When a pinch of salt is not good enough, people add a little more. Similarly, keeping the same principle in mind, many believe, when the rate of delinquency comes to the brim, adding a little more sentence may help in keeping the situation under the thumb. Well, I am in complete disaccord with the statement, and in the lines to come, I will be discussing why, and what are the other means to make crime abate the society.
Where, prison is believed to be a source of redemption for the prisoners, at the same time it is also reflected as hell on earth, to build up fear in the hearts of the most ruthless and astute outlaws. On the contrary, it has been depicted through many movies and there have been countless reviews advocating against the long-time people spend in jail. Primarily, this abominable confinement is a quintessential paradigm of crime school; where novices are juxtaposed with veterans of diabolical epitome, and crime flourishes with the cultivation of fresh blood. Furthermore, this evil incubator is often acknowledged as a second home, among the jailbirds; making it ineffective to create a smog of apprehension in the society. Therefore, prolonging any sentence will only aggravate the situation and impose an extra burden on the commonwealth.
In retrospect of the citation above, it is quite evident that ameliorating the ever-increasing felony and transgression demands alternate solutions. Subsequently, I am listing the following steps that can bring a positive revolution in the crime-filled communities and states. Firstly, identifying the root cause of increased crime and rectifying accordingly can actually put a lid on the situation once for all. For instance, diminishing illiteracy, through subsidizing education; abdicating poverty, by means of social welfare schemes; and intimidating infracting majority, with more harsh punishments and hefty fines. Secondly, liberties adjunct with main legislation, facilitating the perpetrators, must be abrogated to pave the way of true comeuppance. Additionally, law enforcers must get attractive incentives from the government so as to arrest for justice and not for a bribe.
To conclude, society nowadays needs a complete system overhaul with myriad upgrades and this is only possible through public awareness and reformulation of various legislations. Also, there is a dire need of law implementation from police, which is only possible through lucrative salaries and perk packages. Finally, in my opinion, giving a long sentence is not a solution to ever-escalating mischiefs, and if it is inevitable then a death sentence seems a better option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 837, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tractive incentives from the government so as to arrest for justice and not for a bribe....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36473429952 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21440232692 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.947866904 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.647058824 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7647058824 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108914364931 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028730835652 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288839304608 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560601867064 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00805110670223 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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