some people think that children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Gone are the days when children were physically fit and mentally agile while in this technological eopch their deteriorating health is becoming a grave issue of concerned. I completely endorse the statement owning to several reasons to elucidated in the upcoming segments.
First and foremost reason of being unhealthy among children is technological gizmos. To be more precise, these days off springs are more inclined to use mobile phones, computers, laptops and so on. Hence, have no interest in outdoor activities. As a result, they are becoming couch potatoes and gaining weight which also reduces the stamina among them. As per world health organisation, for instance, the ratio of unhealthy juveniles has increased by 57% ever since the usage of electronic gadgets introduced.
Likewise, availability and accessibility of fast food also paves the way to force the young ones to suffer from diseases like obesity, heart attack and many more at an early age. By this I mean, one can have easy approach towards junk foods which are not health oriented. Thus, unhygienic food affects them badly. Not only this but also school children are bound to study for long hours at schools followed by tuitions. In this case, they have lack of time to do physical activities and it invites a great study burden among them.
However, some people believe that parents are very concerned about their children's health and put efforts to improve their erratics schedule and food habits. Nevertheless, guardians themselves are engaged in graveyard shifts and have lack of time to guide their children, even can't supervise their daily routine which poses a great threat to young ones lifestyle.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that there are myriad of reasons which pose a great threat to the lifestyle of young ones in terms of technological gadgets, hectic schedule, unawareness of serious consequences of indoor activities, junk food and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, i mean, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20063694268 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76736932758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633757961783 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8054770442 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102609895965 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324063114895 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351465947043 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539562600047 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399544868211 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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