In this day and age, Invincibly treacherous games have been the first choice amid youngsters. Some people assert that unpredictable games can be problematic and should be banned, however others impose that everyone has the liberty to choose whatever they like. I totally accede with the former notion. This essay will discuss both sides of the view and try to enunciate my views on this topic.
Firstly, Irrefutably extreme sports would give immense pleasure of thrilling and new experiences to life but at the end everyone's life is in danger for that moment. Dangerous sports can be detrimental because perhaps proponents are not so skilled in this sports to make ends meet. For instance, Some undermined contestants loose their precious life in deadly games. America looses his 3000 citizens every year because of this games. Government should limit such activities by making norms against these combating sports to banned them totally and make people understand the values of their lives.
Contrastively, Some folks contend's that they are free to choose any sports they want and do not want any meddling in between this from anyone. Everyone has right to choose good and bad for them and people want their freedom. To illustrate, India provides freedom to its citizens to make their momentous decisions in this newfangled society. Perhaps it is an optimistic sign of freedom but to choose something which can harm you as well as others its not the correct thing. In my perception, this king of decision should be limited and authorities should help individuals to flourish their life in lucrative way not in deteriorated sense instead.
To recapitulate the aforementioned views, this essay discussed both the views and their impacts and effects. Therefore, I do surmise that dangerous sports is not instrumental and can harm anyone. So it should be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14802631579 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70320093103 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.00993689 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0588235294 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191975375105 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653316662903 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635281467021 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125490725943 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025034514861 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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