some people think that family has the most important influence on children`s development, while others believe that factors such as TV, friends, music and books have a more significant impact. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents are the first teachers and they are the one who molds kids thought process early in life. However, as the child grows external factors such as friends, social circle, internet etc. influence their thought process. This essay attempts to analyze the degree of contribution made by family and society in youth’s upbringing.
Kids are like soft clay whose behavior can be shaped early in life. As such, family have crucial role in rearing a child and has the advantage to influence thought process at very young age. Lessons learnt in such a tender age are imbibed into one’s memory for life. But at the same time, if parents don’t act responsibly and are not serious about their ward’s upbringing, then these are at risk of being of anti-social.
On the other hand, as these kids blooms, they make friends, their social circle increases. In the era of internet boom, the elements that influences a child’s thinking have increased exponentially. Adolescent learns a lot from their social environment such as team work, sports, language skills etc. The flow of information must be controlled to protect them dangers. For example, a Blue Whale game which went viral with children, prompts them to do a series of task such as theft, animal abuse and to commit suicide in the last step.
Parents and external factors both play a crucial role in a child’s upbringing. At the same time information being absorbed by these adolescent’s needs to be monitored which is better done by family. As such, in my opinion, contribution of family outweighs the society’s in nurturing young ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14981273408 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85193143048 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9293158713 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165784406326 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570386646019 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424271580824 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106073714483 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143300380208 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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