Some people think that the government should ban smoking from all public areas.
Do you agree or diasgree?
Do you agree or diasgree?
Ever since tobacco was cultivated the life expectancy of smokers is decreasing which makes them ponder about it. People who do not smoke want the Government to prohibit this habit from all the public places. I strongly agree with the statement and believe that smoking is destroying the health and leading to a loss in productivity.
Puffing the nicotine damages not only people who smoke, but also affects the non-smoking part of the society. One of the reasons why the senators are working on this case is to avoid the country getting terminal illnesses such as cancer, hypertension, etc. Some people do not realize that passive smoking is more dangerous than smoking and parent, who smokes in front of his child do not doubt about poisoning them by the fume. Russian Bureau Statistics revealed the information that passive smokers are more likely to develop lung cancer. In other words, a cigarette contains many toxic elements that are harmful to the physical and mental health of human beings.
People who have been smoking for twenty years, they do it more often. Productivity is the most important character of employees. In operation hours, smoking cigarettes takes a lot of time sometimes. Not many employers allow going for a smoke often instead of working because time is money. According to recent research by British scientists, frequent smoking reduces efficiency while labor and mental activity. This is why sports companies are not welcome to people who smoke not only rare but also at all.
In conclusion, smoking is a terrible habit that negatively affects well-being and decreases efficiency while working. Escape from tobacco means investment in oneself and prolonging life as much as possible.
To conclude, I am deeply convinced that the job gratification is more substantial, than the high income, because it brings persons happiness and makes them productive.
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons In other words it is a governmental problem To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes Others say that death penalty is unacceptable in contemporary society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets however others think it a waste of public money when there are so many problems on Earth that the government should be solving Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 95
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons In other words it is a governmental problem Do you agree or disagree 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
For many generations humanity has searched the opportunity t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14432989691 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87423715776 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8102552866 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0198133757783 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00737993678707 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192664352416 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00961728040934 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166576182996 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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