Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although, it is sometimes thought that artists including painters, musicians and poets should be provided with special support from the government. While other people believe that investing government resources and funds on these arts is dispensable and wastage of national capital. In my opinion, I consider that the art and culture is the integral part of the society and it should not be overlooked.
On one hand, some people think that promoting and preserving art and therefore providing artists with appropriate funds should be the part of the government policies and I agree. In other words, artists such as painters, musicians etc. require proper assistance in order to cultivate their artistic skills and continue practicing their interests. Additionally, art and culture are the backbone of the society and therefore by giving and helping artists with proper facilities is beneficial for the society as well. For instance, there are several musicians and painters whose masterpiece art is exemplary and have earned global recognition. Furthermore, providing help and support to artists is crucial to maintain and protect the country's heritage that is otherwise diminishing day by day.
On the other hand, it is often believed that it is better to emphasize on basic and essential sectors such as healthcare, education etc. rather than investing government's resources on the artists and their artwork. Another reason why preserving art such as music, poetry and painting is loosing its importance in young generation is more inclined to earn and progress rapidly. Consequently, pursuing certain art requires patience and perseverance which is not everyone's cup of tea.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that supporting art is indispensable and beneficial for artists and the society as a whole. Without this no nation can do progress. It is mandatory to encourage such artisans for the betterment of individual as well as the entire community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38782051282 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93679130665 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.247906397 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227962932692 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718241381503 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651859759619 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135496178034 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688470635271 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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