Some people think the government is wasting money on science and this money could better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A significant number of people believe that state is draining wealth by spending on science, instead of this it should utilized in other prospects. In my opinion, I completely disagree, as the tasks performed by humans in saving lives with the help of technology is unachievable without using science.
New discoveries to make life safer and free from diseases for humans is only done by science, therefore it is vital for any nation to spend money in it. Almost every day new infections are arising in this world and scientists are working hard to discover medicines to cure human being from these infections. For instance, many diseases are being cured by various drugs invented by number of scientists around the world and this could have not been possible without the support of government funding.
Security and protection of assets is necessary for every nation and this cannot be achieved without brains of scientists, thus it become pivotal to spend money in such subjects. In this competitive world every nation is struggling to achieve greater success, thus defeating others can give birth to enemies, therefore it is vital to save the country from such enemies and scientific tools are required during that time to save the country from enemy nations. For instance, development of nuclear power is essential for any nation to secure their land and people from enemy nations which can target them during war like situations.
In conclusion, scientific inventions are high in demand in this modern world to protect humans from deadly infections as well as from rival countries which can target them during crises or any other dangerous situations. Hence, the government must spent money in science to educate people and promote other activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is unachievable without using science. New discoveries to make life safer and f...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...d without brains of scientists, thus it become pivotal to spend money in such subjects...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13240418118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62184877154 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.520533101 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.3 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118190511172 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601803085497 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686421615443 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781280604842 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381646631958 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.