Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere?
To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is argued that a lot of funds are being wasted on developing arts or historical monuments by the public administration rather than putting them to other useful things. I completely agree with the above viewpoint keeping in mind other factors that need more funding as compared to arts and it involves money infusion, constructing huge museums or cultural parks for display.
Although arts have been an integral part of medieval times, nowadays with the population increasing every single day, there are many other factors like poverty and infrastructure that need more attention from respective governments. Poverty has become a menace in some economies around the world because of population explosion and in order to handle this, most of the nation’s budget should be allocated to eradicate such a situation. Moreover, investment in infrastructural enhancement is the need of an hour to accommodate overgrowing inhabitants. To illustrate, most developing nations are infusing huge amounts of money on social causes like poverty and developing cities to raise standards of people.
Another reason why most Governments should stop financing arts as it involves building huge museums and cultural parks for the display of hand-made sculptures and artwork of historical monuments. Furthermore, such buildings acquire a piece of land that can be used for constructing more medical clinics and community centers instead. For instance, the Italian Government spends half of its annual budget maintaining historical buildings and constructing new places for boosting tourism while ignoring countryside areas that need the utmost attention.
To sum up, Arts may attract huge crowds and even involves a lot of fame for some artists but it is not more than a leisure activity for most of the people around the globe, and they believe spending money is like wasting money on them. In addition, to showcase such creativities huge money from the yearly budget of any nation gets wasted on building museums and cultural grounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4213836478 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92508448083 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0200202905 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.727272727 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171614453641 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624808786308 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433578580447 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108079415911 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045005630091 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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