Some people believe that the government is spending money on arts and this money should be used in other fields more important. In my opinion, art is so important and the government has at least two motives to spend some money on it.
First of all, for centuries, the art in its many forms has been used as an expression form and also communication. The government has the responsibility to preserve and offer ways to population appreciate it. Museums and art galleries are great examples of how the government can maintain and show to population our ancient arts. Throw of ancient art, that represents their age with pictures and sculptures, we can learn or at least guess how was life at the time.
Secondly, art is also culture and entertainment. Music, photography, theatre, and cinema are popular ways of expression these days. Most of them, there is no public money, showing us that there are more people that appreciate that don’t. Nevertheless, there are local cultures or even specific art expressions like classic concerts that are also important but if the government doesn’t help them, they will disappear because they are not auto-sustainable. In that case, the government should work with private organizations to promote these kinds of arts.
To sum up, the government is selected for its people to represent them. One of their responsibilities is preserving our culture which means our art as well. Thus, the government has to spend some money with arts, preserving our ancient arts and promoting popular arts.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, at least, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08661417323 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97734642411 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5054992097 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233134054387 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846580036891 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867209253716 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161729758997 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972251042177 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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