Some people think that higher institutions should concentration more on academic subjects such as history and the physical sciences, while others think that they should concentrate more on practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery, etc.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people argue that colleges should put extra focus on educational subjects whereas students think that educational institutions should provide more practical and vocational courses. In my opinion, I believe that academic subjects such as science and arts subjects should be given priority because of the following reasons.
To begin with, art subjects or scientific courses are basic education for almost every student. These types of subjects strengthen scientific rationality and the logical reasoning of the children. For example, general science educates real facts about earth such as gravity of earth and law of attraction which were unknown facts before the arrival of scientific reasoning.
Furthermore, social or political values that are essential to regulate the social life of an individual and these values are well gained from educational books. For instance, old stories of history give knowledge to the children about nations' past glories and awareness about the significance of language, culture and moral ethics. Since science subjects teach analytical thinking upon false beliefs and art subjects explain moral principles, this assists in becoming a better human being.
On the other hand, in contemporary times unemployment rates are rising dramatically. However, the high skilled jobs are in high demand with better career prospects. These concerns divert youngsters to go for special skill courses such as cooking or mechanical streams. Although these courses have campus placements, these courses have no value if students do not have basic education in academic subjects.
To conclude, it seems advisable that every subject has their own value and importance. Nevertheless, I believe that academic subjects are a basic platform for almost every child which prepares him for further future education.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67391304348 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74240659838 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9992205131 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231355932109 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740041396433 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814197580947 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130220579006 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118772263887 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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