Some People Think It Is Acceptable To Use Animals For The Benefit Of Humans. Other People Think It Is Wrong To Exploit Animals For Human Purposes. What Is Your Opinion?
There has been much of a discussion revolving around the issue whether animals should be used for the benefit of human or some believe that is wrong to exploit animals for human use. In this essay, I will explain why animals are vital for human use, compared with exploitation of animals.
Animals play an essential role in the life of human beings. Firstly, animal skin can be very useful in making woolen clothes, leather jackets, belts and shoes for human fashion. Moreover, some animals are also slaughtered for human consumption. Secondly, animals are a part of nature's life cycle, however, if animals are not used for human benefit, then there will be an increase in the population of animals across the globe. For example, a fish lays thousands of eggs in the water at a given time and if they are not hunted for human consumption, then the population would rapidly increase and there will be not enough water in the world. Therefore, animals are necessary for human survival.
In contrast, some people believe that exploiting animals for the benefit of human use is immoral. Apparently, some people are orthodox and religious. However, they believe that animals should not be used for human purposes, as they are also a part of nature and has equally paramount significance in the world. According to some individuals, killing animals for human purposes will affect their religious and cultural sentiments.
Having considered both the views, I think animals should be used for human purposes as it is beneficial in many ways. Also, animals can reproduce multiple times and continue the journey of the human life cycle. Overall, my opinion is that animals play an important role for humans and should be used for human purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54473328762 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3678497443 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497427650916 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221251813597 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1008894401 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360256512157 0.151304729494 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375290898653 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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