Some people think that it is better for a child to grow up in the countryside than in the city, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, a better atmosphere is imperative for the nurture of the children. Owing to this reason, certain people put forward the argument that villages prove to be better for bringing kids up rather than urban areas. This essay will analyse both perspectives. However, my inclination is in line with growing a child in cities.
On the onset, there are plethora of compelling reasons behind holding the view in favour of villages by some. First and the foremost is the obvious unpolluted environment in them. It has been observed that countrysides have less population with less means of transportation which results in pure and fresh air to breath in. Consequently, children get more benefits fir their health as they expose to less pollution. Moreover, joint families, quite often in countryside, set a platform for them to embibe more ethics. For example, it is reported by times of India after carrying out a survey that 75% of youngones- belonged to villages- had more understanding and stronger relationships with their families as well as friends as they were more exposed to moral values by grandparents.
However, a school of thought argues that countryside is not a better place for children's nuture. First of all, villages do not possess the advantage of having modern facilities which are vital for toddlers' development. Better medical care, best educational institutions, and sound transportation system are the important facets of modern life which is, unfortunately, not a part of countryside areas yet. What is more, since in cities, children get more freedom to take their minor decisions regarding their daily lives such as food clothes and so on in very young age, they become more independent which paves the way for the society to have bold and more intelligent citizens later.
Conclusively, considering both the opinions, i second my outlook of bringing grownups in cities rather than villages in terms of facilitating them with more provided life ,and for making them more independent as per the need of hour in present era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18862275449 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93591080123 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619760479042 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8951758806 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.533333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155989753099 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558269221751 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043000575039 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101618587344 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609733688917 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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