Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while other think that life in the countryside is more suitable.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
Conflicting views exists as to whether raising children in urbanized regions or in villages is the most righteous decision for parents to make. Drawing on solid observations, perks of raising children in cities is providing them with better education possibilities and in villages is having friendly neighborhood while setbacks for cities is unsafe surroundings and for countryside is being far away from modern entertainment.
It goes without saying that growing children in Megapolises grant them great education opportunities since the best Schools and Universities are in that region. Obviously better education enables finding excellent job opportunities in future. Consequently, the successful future of child is more evident if he or she was raised in the city. When it comes to villages, advantage of growing there is having friendly-neighborhood which will care for you child safety and social skills. Children in countryside usually play with each other daily and they get special monitoring by elders.
Notwithstanding such considerations, drawbacks of living in city is unhealthy toxic environment with manufactured food which directly affects average the life span of city population. That is to say, raising child in hazardous environment does not seem as a proper choice for safe future of him or her. Regarding countryside, disadvantage is that there is no modern entertainment for children to have fun. Striking example is that theatre’s, cinema’s, attractions etc. are usually in highly populated regions, which are far away from countryside. As a result, children would not have fulfilled fun life.
In conclusion, raising child in city has advantage of better education opportunities with disadvantage of health issues while in villages positive side is being cared not only by parents but also neighborhood and setback is being far away from modern entertainment, therefore living boring life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Conflicting views exists as to whether raising children in urbanized regions o...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...les finding excellent job opportunities in future. Consequently, the successful future of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65410958904 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34696110237 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0547360153 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187289153836 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06201293343 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383180365944 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115855950441 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270209714675 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.