Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Other, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the important of education which frequently generates a great deal of heated debates has now become even more controversial. While some people maintain the opinion of separate school by gender, in my opinion, I believe that mixed schools could bring more beneficial.
At the outset, the idea of separate schools by gender comes from the fact that boys and girls have different characteristic. In fact, in the older society, while the men were required to be strong and take the main responsibility to develop the country, women, in contract, just played the support roles. An instance illustrates this action is that in boys’ school, children are taught about political, economic and military whereas in institutes for girls, the main topic was about cuisine and house works.
However, in modern society, there are myriads of reasons why boys and girls should be educated in mixed schools. First, the society now encourages men and women to contribute the same. As the result, they must have the same education. Furthermore, a mixed environment helps to develop good sentiments of children. For example, by contacting difference genders at young age, children have chance to leaning about love and become more helpful.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, in my opinion, I’m inclined to believe that school must be for both girls and boys to study. The most crucial responsibility of the government is to upgrade the education to satisfy the requirement of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25619834711 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85167082619 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.625305473 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246273271034 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816933947425 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911725367285 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145109172291 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318658151659 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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