Some people think it is better to travel by car in the city. Others, however, think traveling by bicycle is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Travel to other counties, which become the majority of people’ choose when they want to escape from their dreadful daily life. some people, for example, the like to travel by car, whereas for others, they would prefer to utilize bicycles, and I believe that travel by car is a better idea.
There are some reasons for people who enjoy travel in a city by bicycles. Firstly, they would more than happy to be embraced by nature. The wind, for example, is often to carry some smell like the grasses, followers, and the rain. when they are riding a bicycle, they can easy to feel these smells. Secondly, they might have planned a week to stay in the city, so they no need to visit the tourist attractions in one day. In this case, they can have a slow pace to cycling around the city and gain a deeper understanding of the local food and culture.
On the other hand, people prefer to travel by car might be because they travel with their family. Commonly, young adults travel alone with their baby or elders who might not able to ride a bike, and this can be a good reason that they would like to travel by car. Furthermore, travel to another city might cost you a fortune, so the period of stay in the same city often not be too long. For instance, I was travel to Europe with my wife last year, and we do not have enough time and money to stay in a city more than three days because we wanted to visit as much city as possible, so most time we move to one and other tourism attractions by Taxi, and it did let us have enough time to experience all famous spots.
In conclusion, while I can understand that people want to closer to the natural, I do think the conveniences of traveling by car outweighed by cycling around the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41538461538 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26960570566 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2099046917 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205874658553 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831955131727 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803347221019 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148522211707 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631477154079 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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