Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, others think it is more beneficial individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports play a crucial role in mental and physical well being of a person. Some argue that playing a team sport is more advantageous than taking part in an individual sport, I partially agree to this statement. In this essay I will analyze how team sport is more enjoyable and develops leadership skills alongside the benefits of not playing a team sport.
To begin with, sports when played with teams are more entertaining and pleasurable. sharing equal responsibility with other team-mates, there will be no lack of motivation even when a person is not having their best day. Secondly, evolution of leadership skills. Adverse situations are not uncommon in any game. Absorbing pressure and uplifting the spirit of others are key attributes of a leader which are usually found in sports-persons. To illustrate this, 20% of ex-skippers from various sports such as football and cricket, comprise the list of top 100 motivational speakers rolled out by Oxford university. Therefore it is possible to state that playing a team sport is not only enjoyable but also aids in becoming a better leader.
Although there is a case for enhancing leadership skills in a team sport, the concentration and dedication required in an individual sport cannot be understated. It is not easy to train alone everyday and keeping the goal insight. The amount of dedication required to excel at top level consistently is unmatchable to their counterparts playing in a team. Furthermore, the onus is on the individual even if its a win or loss. The honors, prize money need not be shared as with the critics in a bad performance. Thus it is conclusively clear that results are relative to efforts of an individual, more dedication and focus leads to long lasting glory.
To sum it up, despite the advantages of taking part in an individual sport, I feel that joyous moments in life are in sharing with others which can be done in a group sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9018404908 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94924891767 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5024908578 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288417149357 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909682659352 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819235341429 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187131598207 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813969782403 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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